12-12-2008, 09:42 PM
I think this is a great start and the colors do work well together. I would agree that the bright colors are a little much but keep in mind that the bright colors also create the the focus and in turn the composition. The branch pushes the direction also. Maybe something to think about,....? I feel like the entire sketch has brush movements to direct the viewer to the focal point, with an exception of the tracks that move the eye in the opposite direction.
but great job and I look forward to more!