04-08-2010, 11:27 AM
Hi adornanimation, :)
The sketch is looking good; I like the region where, the birds are flying! :) I guess, you've composited a Sky photo in the sketch, isn't it? The mountain at the center, is not helping the composition; you might want to reduce it's height, which will prevent the blockage that, the mountain was causing! Also, take a-lot of care about the Light & Shadow region in your sketch; currently, it's not getting much attention to! Lastly, try to create some interesting shapes with the mountain ranges! Will wait for more Matte-Painting sketches!
Last edited by kaustavsinha; 04-08-2010 at 11:32 AM..