07-23-2010, 02:25 PM
Its looking good. The perspective is looking ok, atmospheric perspective seems to be there. I would say be careful about the large dark areas of the image. Try to unify the colours also. I think the colours on the right hand side of the image work well together. I would suggest replicating these on the left as well, I'm not sure the grey magenta in the sky works well.
Good going so far. Looking forward to seeing the next iteration!
Dante Harbridge Robinson