04-11-2012, 04:51 PM
Hi Darvin, cool idea, I like the aerial view.
A few thoughts: right now the concept reads a bit monochromatic and blocky. Compositionally, it's a tad symmetrical, though a strategically chosen overcast sky might help the image move toward a more naturalistic setting. I would suggest blocking in the sky first, reexamining the composition, and then proceeding on.
Hope you have time to see it through, best of luck!