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Default 08-20-2012, 03:44 PM

yeah great start... agree with above, my thoughts would be to have a look at the edge of the far mountains and how light would 'wrap' over them from the sky, your ref pics show great examples. maybe lift the mountains 'blacks' just a bit more to push them away - more imposing that way and de-sat a bit. I can see it's in the original plates but it looks like the steam on the left goes left and the right goes right, a bit unnatural? it also feels like you have two suns... maybe that bright spot in the middle should go? lastly a suggestion to bring some snow back into the foreground to bring it all together. great painting - seamless. cheers dave
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