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Default Deserted open space and rest :) - 10-05-2006, 12:26 PM

:D Hi men! :oops:
I hope u like my new work...Please,traditionally wish to hear your opinion and critique.
Thanks all men! :wink:

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Default Great - 10-05-2006, 12:57 PM

woow,,, great look,,, beaty work,,, I like it !
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Default 10-05-2006, 11:20 PM

:D thank u maxfurtado !
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Default 10-06-2006, 01:18 AM

Irhen,

Really nice sketch! Reminds me of Waking life/A scanner darkly.

Something not quite right yet with the painting though. Maybe the lower cliffs could do with some more sunlight hitting them. More than that, the top left rock photos aren't integrated very convincingly, they look smudged together at the moment.

You're very prolific, you need a job to occupy you.

Jim
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Default 10-06-2006, 04:42 AM

You are better and better!
Keep up!
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Default 10-06-2006, 05:06 AM

Hi Irhen! It's me again!



well if your focus is to make a real image, so take a look:

Red Area: sharpen boarders

Blue Area: copy the red area, it seems a little strange, that kind of dirt in a top of a mountain, where the rains come down and take the dirt to the bottom of the ground down there, It would never exists...

Green area: work more on the rivers boarder too

the rest is perfect.... and as he said, put more sunlight on the matte...

and after that... I'll use it as my wall paper hahahaha

Don't forget to put your signature..

bye!
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Default Birds - 10-06-2006, 06:15 AM

Irhen,, I like to see a birds flying in the valley,, can you do it ?

Thanks :wink:
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Default 10-06-2006, 08:54 AM

very promising , nice work Irhen , fixing the stuff in critics will make this image perfect
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Default 10-06-2006, 02:20 PM

lightwell :) thanks!! :wink:
kbarts :D thanks friend:oops:
Cobawsky
:shock: :D Greetings! I agree with you in your criticism! And thanks for good words! :wink:
maxfurtado ok!more birds :) haha
Emre Goren :D thanks!
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