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Default Canyon City wip need help - 08-02-2010, 07:48 AM

hi everyone, hoping you guys can give me some suggestions/critique/comments or advice on my matte. I'm lost as to what I should do next to improve it. Thanks!
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Default 08-22-2010, 01:49 AM

Your scale and perspectives are off. Your colors don't match. Is that moon supposed to be floating 200 ft off the earth.

1) Scale and perspective - Create a grid and work off it. Set your horizon and choose 1 point or 2 point perspective. ( google it if you need some pointers) The scale of the some of the buildings should be a little bit bigger whilst keeping that big/ small building look.

2) Your color schemes should match as well as deserts are known for a lot of atmospheric dust so you should haze out some of the foreground.

3) The moon .. well that should be faded out and hazed out to look like its beyond the horizon.

Keep plugin' the more you do ... the better you get oh and I know its a lame point but thats a Plateau not a canyon.
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