[kuroe702]

Haven't post here for a while,
so I did a day to night conversion and make it more of a futuristic cityscape. Hopefull I'll have time to do some animation with it.




original plate:


hope you guys like it!

[DanteHR]

I like your colours. I think the main thing stopping the image looking real is the clouds, especially in the top centre.

Is it supposed to look real? Or is it meant to be a painting. It kind of reminds me of the painted art on the cover of GTA at the moment. Whatever it is though it's very pretty, just the centre clouds need improving.

[kuroe702]

Thanks!

yeah I felt the piece is not as realistic, but I couldn't exactly figure out y lol
and at this point I somehow don't know how real I want it to look too =)
but thanks for your suggestion! I'll try to replace the cloud and see if it helps!

[thyn]

Hi. I think you have problem with the scale of the buildings. Also the left part looks too flat compared to the right. The lights are too "cartoonish". Those blue lines are not correct either. Try to follow the perspective of the original plate. I think this could become good one, if you fix some issues.

[kuroe702]

Thanks a lot thyn, it's great to get some suggestions from the professionals =)
definitely need them as I try to break into this field. I'll work on it more when I get a chance to.