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Default Tudor City Gate - 10-15-2011, 05:06 AM



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Default 10-15-2011, 01:19 PM

By far your best work to-date.

Remember composition. Keep in mind atmospheric perspective, and you should also lose detail as things move farther away from the camera. Values will also start to get closer to one another so there's less definition.


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Default 10-16-2011, 08:02 AM

Thank you, you helped get me there. You is one of my true friends,

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Default 10-16-2011, 12:58 PM

Hello, you have to work on ambient lights, atmosphere, put some haze, fog, shadows and painted lights in somes areas.
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Default 10-16-2011, 01:27 PM

hi mate this was for a comp they did not want any of that stuff in, this was straight from comp. Can work on it later this week


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Default 10-24-2011, 11:28 PM

not going to bother its crap apparently!


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Default 10-25-2011, 01:16 AM

Hey Rich!

I actually think this piece has some potential to it. The foreground gate looks fairly nice.

What bothers me are the whites in the wooden buildings in the middle. It's too bright.

I'd try toning it down a little and maybe adding some weathering effects.

Accenting the shadows in a sort of ambient occlusion fashion would help too, in my opinion.


Keep it up!
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