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Default MoonLight - 06-15-2009, 09:06 PM

Hello !!
Here my last job..... I've influenced from landscapes from midle orient night



Pleace comments thanks!

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Default 07-17-2009, 01:53 AM

the moon is not a spotlight, all the sand should have equal illumination due to the moon's natural lighting, also, you added too much haze and covered all the details within the sand
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Default 07-23-2009, 12:14 AM

thanxx man....
I will be working on it...
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Default 08-14-2009, 01:06 AM

Well, I've made some changes .....
I gave a bit of texture and colors to the moonlight
I have a doubt on the perception of the texture of the sand
Any suggestions on how they could get a little more realism?
Thank you!

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Default 08-19-2009, 06:32 AM

Maybe you could use more momplementary colors in the shadows versus moonlight - like you do in the foreground and it looks the best part of the image so far. Some reds and browns give scenery some shape and also gives stronger feeling to the blues.
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Default 08-19-2009, 11:33 AM

Thanks for the advice!
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