Trees at background in the first picture are really big one. First sketch have great composition i think. Maybe the rock at the left with this weird falling waterfall should be little larger but it's not so necessary.
In the second picture there is no haze at horizont. We lookin' at the direction where the light came from and this rock is pretty far from camera. So I think there should be some light distortion in the air if we were lookin' from distance
We are waitin' for more your sketches. You got talent to be great environmental artist
sorry for my english... cheers ; ) !!!
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Last edited by nordenworks; 10-31-2009 at 11:47 PM..
Norden, thank you very much for the crits and motivating comment! I agree - trees too big and waterfall thing is awkward - still trying to figure everything out. It would be very cool if could do this for living.
Grey-scale doodle for my next sketch that I want to work on - will have to finish it next weekend though as that's the only time I have to myself paint...
I have done a quick update (SEE ABOVE) - used some brushes to lay in some areas very quickly and will paint everything by hand later - just need to make sure everything is working.